Kill the Babies

— Written by: Ellen Hermens

Of course not real ones, but the ones in speeches. Babies still are being loved, cared for and cuddled. I talk about stories a speaker loves when they disturb a speech. But how is it possible personal stories disturb a speech? I myself train people to use personal stories.

Baby disturbing the smooth "flow" of dominosRecently I listened to a speech in which the speaker presented the motto: “Change for the better – not for fun!” His presentation started excitingly and he led us to the Massai who promoted that motto. But then he changed to the subject of misusing english words in german (in german it´s called “Denglish”) and ranted a bit before changing again to “Change for the better…”. The audience was confused as he didn´t connect these topics in any way.

Later the speaker confirmed that “Denglish” is one of his emotional topics about which he could rant endlessly, but he also perceived the confusion of the audience. But: how can we prevent ourselves from such?
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The Chicken Eagle

— Written by: Ellen Hermens
Flying eagle

Image: Jeff Ratcliff / FreeDigitalPhotos.net

Or the moral of the story

There is a popular story about an eagle which had been raised among chickens as a chicken behaving just like one of them. He doesn´t fly. He picks on the ground to find his food and does all what a chicken does. In the end when a naturalist brings him far away to the top of a mountain thrusting him in the air – the eagle begins to fly just like the king of the sky.

A nice story which we tell others when we coach them to help them gain the self-confidence of an eagle. Only: are you an eagle or rather a chicken? Let have a closer look into the story…

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Message Makes Difference!

— Written by: Ellen Hermens

Speaker with a megaphoneSome people only deliver speeches to hear themselves talk. Or worse: speaker who use the speech as therapy to solve an emotional issue of their life.

In these situation gains often only the speaker something – in the best cases the audience is being entertained, but will they learn anything? In the worst case they are led into a sad emotion or even frightened.

As speaker we are responsible for our audience and what they get from our speech. We are responsible to entertain and leave them in a great mood.

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Explain it to your Granny

— Written by: Ellen Hermens
Erklären Sie es so einfach wie Ihrer Oma

Explain it as simple as if your grandmother

At the weekend I attended a demonstration in Munich – against censorship in the web. This is where I experienced the great speech of Michael Jäger . Thank you for this great example. Michael Jäger presented in a passionate and enthusiastic way. He explained the situation so well and simply as if he explained it his grandmother. You can check out the (German) Blog where he shows another simple example or watch on this page his (German) Video.

What did Michael Jäger do?

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Has your speech a purpose?

— Written by: Ellen Hermens

Female archer aiming at the targetSo many times I observe speakers who tell a great story – only I miss the purpose in their speech. Especially recently I observed this: as top executive I am regularly the district representative on conferences of the European Toastmasters. Those conferences host the contests for the winners who compete at the European championship.

How do you recognize a purpose?

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Presentation Zen

— Written by: Ellen Hermens

Simple Ideas on Presentation Design and Delivery by Garr Reynolds You probably know the situation: slides overly filled with text and complex diagrams. The presentator stands somewhere at the side and describes or worst case – he reads it to you. PowerPoint karaoke. (As far as I know this really is being offered in Berlin: You get your slides and then present them – a funny ideaq, if you are after something humorous.

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